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PostSubject: The Fanfic   Fri Jan 09, 2009 4:06 pm

This is where we will write the fanfic Smile

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PostSubject: Re: The Fanfic   Tue Apr 07, 2009 5:54 pm

It was an average day at Arkham when the patients and inmates sent to it saw three kids being escorted inside the building, all on a metal stretcher tied down to it. One a young blonde girl that looked to be around three years old, another two blonde girls that seemed to be twins and a year older than the previous girl. Then last of all was a lad of about eight that was thrashing around to the point he had to be sedated.

They where placed into a room that had four cells, bulletproof glass allowed each cell to see the others. Each child was placed into one of the cells.

The doctor entered the room, "Ah The Peterson Children, keep a very close eye on them. They are deemed dangerous and should only be approached if necessary." He went to each cell looking in at its occupant.

He looked down to find the name of the first one: Riley Peterson
Age: 3
Youngest of the Peterson Children and seemed to have control over plants and earth.

Next: Theta Peterson
Age: 4
Twin of Celestia Peterson, seemed to be able to control the wind.

Third: Celestia Peterson
Age: 4
Twin of Theta Peterson, seemed to have control over water.

Last of all: Liam Peterson
Age: 8
Eldest of the Peterson Children and seemed to have control over fire.

The Doctor left the room and talked to the man and woman stood outside the room that held the cells, "Are you sure you wish to place them here?"

"They're abominations, I would have preferred to be rid of them permanently but this was all we could do."

The woman looked to the man agreeing, "They are freaks of nature." She did not know how true her words were as each child had the ability to control an element, but they where not freaks they were the next step in Evolution.

The parents left after signing papers that released the children to Arkham, also giving them permission to do what they wanted to the children.

Things that would be done to them, would change each of them for their whole lives. Things no child should be witness to as well as things no child should go through.
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PostSubject: Re: The Fanfic   Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:07 pm

Very good intro. I can understand the children wanting to get revenge on their parents. They sounded sooo mean! Mad
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PostSubject: Re: The Fanfic   Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:10 pm

So you don't mind that being the intro for the fanfic then? What about the title 'Arkham Asylum's Not So Insane' what do you think of that?

Also if you want we can start writing it now, or at least the part in Arkham.
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PostSubject: Re: The Fanfic   Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:16 pm

I think that is very good for the intro. How much of the story are we going to write where they are still kids in Arkam?

Is this how it works: You write a chapter, then I write one, then you, then me, then you again and so on? I was a little confused by that.
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PostSubject: Re: The Fanfic   Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:26 pm

About one or two chapters for Arkham I think, The fist part after the intro being their first night in Arkham then maybe a few years later when something happens like the year Theta dies then the main things that happen in Arkham until they escape.

No we write the chapters together but the parts where they are not together we write separately. So if they are together it would be something like this:

Liam woke up from his sedated sleep, he looked around at each of his siblings and asked them all, "You okay?" He was confused and angry at their parents but his concern for his siblings was much higher.

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Celestia and Theta both nodded to him answering at the same time, "We're okay Liam."

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Then you write Riley's response. Make sense? Also if there is another character in the scene like a doctor you can write them or I write them depending on what's going on. Make sense?
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PostSubject: Re: The Fanfic   Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:32 pm

Okay, I get it. But how are we both going to work on the same chapter at once?
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PostSubject: Re: The Fanfic   Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:39 pm

On here, I know there will be pauses in between our posts but it will get written and we'll just have one thing where its just writing the fanfic so it doesn't get confusing and this one and the other Idea one for talking about it.

Kay?
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PostSubject: Re: The Fanfic   Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:42 pm

Okay. I guess I get. So, are we going to start the story now, or wait till later?
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PostSubject: Re: The Fanfic   Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:46 pm

Kay I've made one. Have you figured out how to navigate on here yet? if not here's the link to the area where we just write it.

the -- is to show POV change.

http://teoc.ultimaterpg.org/arkham-asylum-s-not-so-insane-f1/writing-the-fanfic-t12.htm#57

I have made other areas you can use, for instance if you make something for the fanfic in this forum there is:

The Fanfic: This one where we discuss plot and other things lol

Writing the Fanfic: The place where we write the fanfic.

Character Page: Where we write the relationships between characters. Like what the character thinks of other characters.

Videos and Music for the Joint Fanfic: Where more than likely I will post pics, videos and music for the fanfic. But you can too Smile

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PostSubject: Re: The Fanfic   Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:49 pm

Yes we can start now, as the intro started it and the example I put above is the start of it as well. Be sure to check the other areas as well, as if you wonder where I've gone I may put in

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in the writing area if I'm going to bed or other reasons but I will also put it in this area as well Smile
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